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The provided lin graph elucidates the comparsion of the price increase an petrol and diesel fuel from 2000 to 2021.

The provided lin graph elucidates the comparsion of the price increase an petrol and diesel fuel from 2000 to 2021. 9wP3n
As a general trend, the price of petrol has been rocketing steadily, while there has been a gradual upward trend in the price of diesel fuel. As far as the price of petrol is concerned, it was 2500 mnt in 2021, which is the highest; in contrast, it used to be sold by its lowest price 1300 mnt in 2000. Moreover, it is worth noting that mongolians constantly experienced its of at 1950 mnt for five years from 2010 between 2015. The most striking difference is that the price in 2021 is 750 mnt more than that of 2000. Surprisingly, it should also be consedered that the increase of 400 mnt for three years can be observed in the data from 2007 to 2010 in this chart, and it soared up gradually. As regards with the price of diesel fuel, the lowest price was 1600 mnt in 2000; nevertheless, the highest price has been 2500 mnt in 2021. Additionally, it has been observed that it was stabilized by 2100 mnt from 2005 between 2010 and by 2400 from 2012 between 2020; on the contrary, it was substantial leaped in 2011 and 2014. interestingly, it should be also noted that, the increase of 900 mnt for 21 years can be noticed in this data and it has been fluctuating relatively.
As a general trend, the
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of petrol has been rocketing
steadily
, while there has been a gradual upward trend in the
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price
of diesel fuel.

As far as the
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price
of petrol
is concerned
, it was 2500
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mnt
in 2021, which is the highest;
in contrast
, it
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used
to
be sold
by its lowest
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price
1300
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mnt
in 2000.
Moreover
, it is worth noting that
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mongolians
constantly
experienced
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its
of at 1950
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mnt
for five years
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from 2010 between 2015
. The most striking difference is that the
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price
in 2021 is 750
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mnt
more than that of 2000.
Surprisingly
, it should
also
be
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consedered
that the increase of 400
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mnt
for three years can
be observed
in the data from 2007 to 2010 in this chart, and it soared up
gradually
.

As regards with the
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price
of diesel fuel, the lowest
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price
was 1600
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mnt
in 2000;
nevertheless
, the highest
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price
has been 2500
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mnt
in 2021.
Additionally
, it has
been observed
that it
was stabilized
by 2100
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mnt
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from 2005 between 2010
and by 2400
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from 2012 between 2020
;
on the contrary
, it was substantial leaped in 2011 and 2014.
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interestingly
, it should be
also
noted that, the increase of 900
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mnt
for 21 years can
be noticed
in this data and it has been fluctuating
relatively
.
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IELTS academic The provided lin graph elucidates the comparsion of the price increase an petrol and diesel fuel from 2000 to 2021.

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