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The provided chart illustrated data the amount of unsatisfied clients to customers service during 6 months since 2009. According to this chart, there are 3 kinds of connection with clients by email /fax, by telephone and in person. After analysing this chart, it can be witnessed that by email /fax is sharp plummet, while in person quickly rise, by telephone gradually moderate go up. In during between (Jan -Feb), while by telephone was recevied approximately 1100 complaints, by email/fax and in person similarity were recevied less than that around ( 300 -700 complaints). After that, on Feb by email/Fax and in person intersected were recevied around ( 700 compliments). However, in person moderately less than other. in during from (March -May), both by telephone and in person were quickly rise, by email/Fax was sharply plummet. .
The provided chart illustrated data the amount of unsatisfied clients to customers service during 6 months since 2009. According to this chart, there are 3 kinds of connection with clients by email /fax, by
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telephone
and in person.

After
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analysing
this chart, it can
be witnessed
that by email /fax is sharp plummet, while in
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person
quickly
rise, by
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telephone
gradually
moderate go up.

In during between (Jan -Feb), while by
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telephone
was
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recevied
approximately 1100 complaints, by email/fax and in
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person
similarity were
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recevied
less than that around
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(
300 -700 complaints).

After that, on Feb by email/Fax and in
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person
intersected were
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recevied
around
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(
700 compliments).
However
, in
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person
moderately
less than other.
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in
during from (March -May), both by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
telephone
and in
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person
were
quickly
rise, by email/Fax was
sharply
Consider using a past participle here: "plummeted".
plummet
.
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.

IELTS academic The provided chart illustrated data the amount of information

Academic
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4 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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