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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spemt to coffee and tea for drinking and purchasing habits in five different cities of Austrlia

The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spemt to coffee and tea for drinking and purchasing habits in five different cities of Austrlia lWoGK
Overall, over the whole period people started go to a café for coffee or tea in last month but started to buy fresh coffee in last 4 week’s rate levelled off at 35 %. Sydney is one of the biggest city in Australia. In a month coming to café in this city is observed more than 60% while two types of degrees iindicated between 45% and 43%. The percentage of bought fresh coffe who used fresh coffee were around 63% and 61% respectively in Melbourne and Hobart. However, in Hobart consuming instant coffee grew up than other cities. The same desire for fresh coffe has been abserved in Brisbone and Adelaide with 34%
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levelled off at 35 %.

Sydney is one of the biggest city in Australia. In a month coming to café in this city
is observed
more than 60% while two types of degrees
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iindicated
between 45% and 43%. The percentage of
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bought
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fresh
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coffe
who
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used
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fresh
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coffee
were around 63% and 61%
respectively
in Melbourne and Hobart.
However
, in Hobart consuming instant
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coffee
grew
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up
than other cities. The same desire for
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fresh
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coffe
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abserved
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Brisbone
and Adelaide with 34%
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spemt to coffee and tea for drinking and purchasing habits in five different cities of Austrlia

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