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The provided bar chart illustrate information about what people own and owe in UK from 2000 to 2010.

The provided bar chart illustrate information about what people own and owe in UK from 2000 to 2010. ewmVV
The provided bar chart demonstrates information about what people own and owe in UK from 2000 to 2010 in three different sectors. Overall, it is evident from the data that household steadily increased in every year 2000 to 2010. On the country, businessmans not worth was less as compared with others. To begin with, the houses were using excessive amount of resources in 2000 near about to 4500 millions and government or businesses use less assets. It is quite ignormous. Moreover, the family circle utilise 4600 million net worth in a next two years 2001, 2002. Both authorities is or employment employ neligible means in every period between 2001 to 2010. Probing ahead, in 2003 and 2004 the house little inclined 4600 tons to 5000 gobs. Consequently, the carrier used resources under the zero and administrations upper the Zero. Furthermore, after the 2005 the family circle used high amount of cash flow in next time. It was 6500 lot 6900 and 7000 million respectively. Whart is more, the total count of UK people were also high who own and owe the net worth. It was 6800 dollars.
The provided bar chart demonstrates information about what
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people
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own
and owe in UK from 2000 to 2010 in three
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different
sectors.
Overall
, it is evident from the data that household
steadily
increased in every year 2000 to 2010. On the country,
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businessmans
not worth was less
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.
as
compared with others. To
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begin
with, the
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houses
were using excessive amount of resources in 2000 near about to 4500 millions and
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government
or businesses
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use
Did you mean "fewer"? The noun assets is countable.
less
assets. It is quite
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ignormous
.
Moreover
, the family circle
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utilise
4600 million net worth in a
next
two years 2001, 2002. Both authorities
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is
or employment employ
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neligible
means in every period
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 2001 and 2010".
between 2001 to 2010
. Probing ahead, in 2003 and 2004 the
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house
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little
inclined 4600 tons to 5000 gobs.
Consequently
, the carrier
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used
resources under the zero and administrations upper the Zero.
Furthermore
, after the 2005 the family circle
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used
high amount of cash flow in
next
time. It was 6500 lot 6900 and 7000 million
respectively
.
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Whart
is more, the total count of UK
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people
were
also
high who
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own
and owe the net worth. It was 6800 dollars.
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IELTS academic The provided bar chart illustrate information about what people own and owe in UK from 2000 to 2010.

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