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British student can speak in other language.

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The pie charts illustrate the information about British student in university who is a able to speak in other languages in two periods of time in 2000 and 2010. The general overview is that they are able to speak in only English language is the majority of all. In addition, Spanish is the following language and German is the minority in both two periods of time. According to the pie chart in 2000, no other language is the most of all about 30%. In comparison with Spanish is about 20%, French and another language are 15% at each and two another language and German are the less about 10% Moving to the pie chart in 2010, It can be seen that no other language is still the most about 20%. Consequently, the number is decreasing from 2000 with 10% which is good news owing to the fact thatits show the number of student can speak and learn well. Moreover, speaking French is 20%, two languages is 15% and German and another language are in the same percentage about 10%
The pie charts illustrate the information about British student in university who is
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able to speak in other
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in two periods of time in 2000 and 2010.

The general overview is that they are able to speak in
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English
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is the majority of all.
In addition
, Spanish is the following
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language
and German is the minority in both two periods of time.

According to the pie chart in 2000, no other
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language
is the most of all about 30%.
In comparison
with Spanish is about 20%, French and another
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language
are 15% at each and two another
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language
and German are the less about 10%

Moving to the pie chart in 2010, It can be
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that no other
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is
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the most about 20%.
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, the number is decreasing from 2000 with 10% which is
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the number of student can speak and learn well.
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, speaking French is 20%, two
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is 15% and German and another
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are in the same percentage about 10%
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IELTS academic British student can speak in other language.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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