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The provided bar chart compared six different places in terms of the proportion of metropolitans measured in 1950, 2007, and 2050.

The provided bar chart compared six different places in terms of the proportion of metropolitans measured in 1950, 2007, and 2050. Mqoae
The provided bar chart compared six different places in terms of the proportion of metropolitans measured in 1950, 2007, and 2050. The most striking feature highlighted by the chart is that while the percentage of citizens is expected to reach its highest point in 2050, the year 1950 witnessed the lowest in the percentage of urban residents. In addition, North America is the place where the rate of citizens has been accounting for the highest percentage in the survey year. As can be revealed from the chart, commencing at 15% and 17% were the percentage of citizens in Africa and Asia, respectively in 1950. In contrast, those figures were found the highest in places such as North America and Oceania where the former was six times as high as that of Africa and the latter lag behind with 62%. Meanwhile, North America retained its position with 79% urban residents in 2007, Europe and Caribbean were experienced the figures of 72% and 76% respectively, the penultimate position and bottom position have belonged to Africa and Asia. Anticipating of figures in 2050 show the same rank from all the surveyed targets. North America is predicted to reach its peak at 90% of urban inhabitants, this will be followed by Latin America, Europe. Oceania, Africa, and Asia subsequently occupied the last three positions of the bar chart.
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places in terms of the proportion of metropolitans measured in 1950, 2007, and 2050. The most striking feature highlighted by the
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is that while the
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percentage
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to reach its highest point in 2050, the year 1950 witnessed the lowest in the
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of urban residents.
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America is the place where the rate of citizens has been accounting for the highest
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percentage
in the survey year.

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from the
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chart
, commencing at 15% and 17% were the
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percentage
of citizens in Africa and Asia,
respectively
in 1950.
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the highest in places such as
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North
America and Oceania where the former was six times as high as that of Africa and the latter lag behind with 62%. Meanwhile,
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North
America retained its
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position
with 79% urban residents in 2007, Europe and Caribbean
were experienced
the figures of 72% and 76%
respectively
, the penultimate
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position
and bottom
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have belonged to Africa and Asia. Anticipating of figures in 2050
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show
the same rank from all the surveyed targets.
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North
America
is predicted
to reach its peak at 90% of urban inhabitants, this will
be followed
by Latin America, Europe. Oceania, Africa, and Asia
subsequently
occupied the last three
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positions
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IELTS academic The provided bar chart compared six different places in terms of the proportion of metropolitans measured in 1950, 2007, and 2050.

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