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the process of producing glass bottles

the process of producing glass bottles Q2dL1
A glance at the given diagram illustrates the process of producing glass bottles from the recycled ones. Overall, it is patiently obvious that there are ten prominent stages in this process, initiating with the used glass bottles being collected from the customers and culminating with the final products being packed and sold to global consumption. At the first stage of the process, all of the used bottles are brought to the collection points by the customers and then taken to the cleaning plant by a truck before being delivered to the glass factory. The bottles are cleaned under the high pressurised water system there. After that, all of the cleaned glass bottles are classified by their colors, such as green, brown and clear bottle. In addition, the bottles are then smashed into pieces. The next step begins when the broken pieces of glass are heated in a furnace at melting temperature until they become liquid. This step is followed by the glass liquid being poured into the mould. After that, the liquid are left to cool to become a glass bottle for the following stages involving filling and packing. Coming to the final stages of the process, the glass bottles are despatched to retail outlets and supermarkets.
A glance at the
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given
diagram illustrates the
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process
of producing
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glass
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bottles
from the recycled ones.

Overall
, it is
patiently
obvious that there are ten prominent
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stages
in this
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process
, initiating with the
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used
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glass
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bottles
being collected
from the customers and culminating with the final products
being packed
and sold to global consumption.

At the
first
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stage
of the
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process
,
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all of the
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used
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bottles
are brought
to the collection points by the customers and then taken to the cleaning plant by a truck
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before
being delivered
to the
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glass
factory.

The
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bottles
are cleaned
under the high
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pressurised
water system there. After that,
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all of the
cleaned
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glass
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bottles
are classified
by their colors, such as green, brown and
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clear
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bottle
.
In addition
, the
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bottles
are then smashed into pieces.

The
next
step
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begins
when the broken pieces of
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glass
are heated
in a furnace at melting temperature until they become liquid. This step
is followed
by the
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glass
liquid
being poured
into the
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mould
. After that, the liquid are
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left
to cool to become a
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glass
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bottle
for the following
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stages
involving filling and packing. Coming to the final
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stages
of the
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process
, the
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glass
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bottles
are despatched
to retail outlets and supermarkets.
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IELTS academic the process of producing glass bottles

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
207 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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