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the process of matches manufacture and preparation for sale

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The diagram illustrates the process of matches manufacture and preparation for sale on the market. Overall, it is apparent that there are several stages in the production of matches. The process begins with cutting the wood and ends at the packing stage Looking at the first stage of the production of matchsticks, a log of wood is placed in a peeler and rotated while blade peels a thin of wood, called veneer. These veneers are then chopped to small sticks in the second stage. Next, small sticks will be soaked in tank of ammonium phosphate. In the following stage, soaked sticks are placed in rolling dryer. After that, the matches are blown in hopper and passed through metal duct to the storage area. In the next stage, the matchsticks in storage area are fall into funnel-shaped device, which will be lined up and inserted into a perforated steel belt. While the belt moves along, the tips of matchsticks are dipped in three tanks, paraffin wax, based chemicals, tip chemical respectively. In the following stage the matches moved to drying area. Finally, the matchsticks are packaged.

The diagram illustrates the process of matches manufacture and preparation for sale on the market. Overall
, it is apparent that there are several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 in the production of matches.

The process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 with cutting the wood and ends at the packing stage

Looking at the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 of the production of matchsticks, a log of wood is placed
 in a peeler and rotated while blade peels The phrase 'a thin of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'a' and 'of'.
a thin of
 wood, called veneer.

These veneers are then chopped to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 sticks in the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
. Next
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 sticks will be soaked
 in tank of ammonium phosphate. In the following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, soaked sticks are placed
 in rolling dryer. After that, the matches are blown
 in hopper and passed through metal duct to the storage area.

In the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, the matchsticks in storage area are fall into funnel-shaped device, which will be lined
 up and inserted into a perforated steel belt. While the belt This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocates
moves
 along, the tips of matchsticks are dipped
 in three tanks, paraffin wax, based chemicals, tip chemical respectively
. In the following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 the matches This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to drying area. Finally
, the matchsticks are packaged
. 