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the proportion of household income spent on four type of consumer items in France, Germany,The UK, Turkey and Spain.

the proportion of household income spent on four type of consumer items in France, Germany, The UK, Turkey and Spain. 6mWar

The given table illustrate the proportion of household income spent on four type of consumer items in France, Germany, The UK, Turkey and Spain. The general overview here is that the category of consumer goods that all countries spent most on is Food and Drink with the figure of more than 20% in each nation. The lowest spending could be seen in the category of Clothing in all five countries. In term of food and drink, Turkey spent the most at 36%. The expenditure of Spain also high(31%) compare to Germany with spent the least(22%). France and the UK spent 25%and27% respectively. On the contrary, the lowest expenditure spent on clothing which accounted for under 16% in all countries. Germany spent most on these item at just 15% of their national expenditure which is around double that of France. Moreover, the expenditure for housing is higher than Entertainment. The outlay for housing is between 37% in the UK and 18% in Spain, while the outlay for Entertainment is between 19% in German and only 10% in Turkey.

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 on four type of consumer items in France, Germany, The UK, Turkey and Spain.

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 in the category of Clothing in all five countries.

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