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The manufacture bricks and export for the building industry

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The diagram illustrates the way of in which bricks are made for the building. Overall, there are 7 stages in the process, begging with digging up of the clay and culminating in delivery. Begging the clay used to make the bricks to dig up and digger used to split the clays and dig the clay. Following to this, the roller used to roll the clays and sieve the stones. Then clays and stones is mixed. After that, these bricks are foisted and placed in an oven to 20-24 hours. Finally, the bricks are heated and moderated in 200°C-980°C. Then, bricks are placed in an drying oven to 24-48 hours. After that, the bricks are packaged and bricks are delivered.
The diagram illustrates the way of in which
bricks
are made
for the building.
Overall
, there are 7 stages in the process, begging with digging up of the
clay
and culminating in delivery. Begging the
clay
used
to
make
the
bricks
to dig up and digger
used
to split the
clays
and dig the
clay
. Following to this, the roller
used
to roll the
clays
and sieve the stones. Then
clays
and stones
is mixed
. After that, these
bricks
are foisted
and placed in an oven to 20-24 hours.
Finally
, the
bricks
are heated
and moderated in
200°C
-
980°C
. Then,
bricks
are placed
in
an
drying oven to 24-48 hours. After that, the
bricks
are packaged
and
bricks
are delivered
.
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