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The diagram shows the process of making pencils

The diagram shows the process of making pencils 6K7kB

The diagram depicts the process of pencil production. The process consist of several stages starting with the growing of plant and ending with painting, sharpening and stamping. In the initial stage of process plants are grown and after 4 months they are replanted to another place for better space. In the second stage after three years trees are thinned for better quality thereafter when trees are became mature after 14 years they are cut down for further process. In the subsequent step, trees that are cut down are converted into thin slats by machines in factory and these slats are treated with certain types of chemicals to protect them, after 60 days of treatment the slats are grooved in filled with glue and block lead, thereafter a plane sheet is placed on the grooved sheet just like sandwich, in order to make pencil, then these both slats are hard pressed with heat and are ready cutting. Last but not least, from these slats one by one pencils are cut down and are ready to paint, sharp, and stamped. After this process, finally they are delivered to the local markets.

The diagram depicts the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 of pencil production. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 consist of several stages starting with the growing of plant and ending with painting, sharpening and stamping.

In the initial stage of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 plants are grown
 and after 4 months they are replanted
 to another place for better space. In the second stage after three years trees are thinned
 for better quality thereafter when trees are Consider using a past participle here: "become".become
became
 mature after 14 years they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down for further
 process.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 the subsequent step, trees that are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down are converted
 into thin You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
 by machines in factory and these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
are treated
 with certain types of chemicals to protect them, after 60 days of treatment the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
are grooved
 in filled with glue and block lead, thereafter a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
 sheet is placed
 on the grooved sheet This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like sandwich, in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 pencil, then these both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
 are This word is normally spelled with hyphen.hard-pressed
hard pressed
 with heat and are ready cutting. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, from these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
 one by Don't use the number 'one' with plural words. Did you mean "one pencil", "a pencil", or simply "pencils"?one pencila pencilpencils
one pencils
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down and are ready to paint, sharp, and stamped. After this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, finally
 they are delivered
 to the local markets. 