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The plants show a student common room from five years ago and now.

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The plants illustrate changes in a student common room in 5 years. Overall, the student common room of 5 years ago and now has changed a lot from space room to equipment. Equipment added to the student common room or to raise to a higher level. 5 years ago, the student common room included four round tables and tables with six chairs and it is placed in the area. on the right-hand side of the main door, it has a sink, cupboard, two benches, microwave, refrigerator and in a corner of the room is a cabinet. After 5 year, the student common room is reorganized with some equipment. from the main door, in the right-hand is two bench each left and microwave has double, the rest of the things compared to position before 5 year. It has two circle tables with 6 chairs on 1 table, besides it has 1 rectangle table with 8 chairs. In addition, it has a drinks machine if students want to drink water and has an area bench for laptops and in the corner of the room is a television and armchair.
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in 5 years.

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of 5 years ago and
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a lot from space
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to equipment. Equipment
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or to raise to a higher level.

5 years ago, the
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included four round
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with six chairs and it
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is a cabinet.

After 5
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and microwave has double, the rest of the things compared to position
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5
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. It has two circle
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with 6 chairs on 1
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is a television and armchair.
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IELTS academic The plants show a student common room from five years ago and now.

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6.0
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