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The plans below show the Layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The plans below show the Layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Joog6
The map illustrates the plans to develop university's sports Centre. At present, an entrance to the building is in the South. A reception is located at the front of the building, and a 25m pool is in the middle. Seating area is in the east, while a changing room is in the west of the building. Moreover, there is a gym at the rear of the building. Finally, there two outdoor courts on the east and the west side of the main building. In future, the sports centre will become considerably larger because the outdoor courts will merge into the main building. The gym is going to be extended and a sports hall will be constructed adjoining the seating area towards its right. In addition, two dance studio will be added along the eastern wall. A leisure pool is planed to be set up in the west wing. One changing room will be made in the south-east corner and another in the south-west. Finally, a sports shop and a caffe will be built in the reception area. Although most areas of the center will be change, the reception, the pool and the seating area will remain the same.
The map illustrates the plans to develop university's
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sports
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Centre
.

At present, an entrance to the
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building
is in the South. A reception
is located
at the front of the
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building
, and a
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25m
pool is in the middle. Seating
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area
is in the east, while a changing room is in the west of the
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building
.
Moreover
, there is a gym at the rear of the
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building
.
Finally
, there two outdoor courts on the east and the west side of the main building.

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In future
, the
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sports
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centre
will become
considerably
larger
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because
the outdoor courts will merge into the main
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building
. The gym is going to
be extended
and a
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sports
hall will
be constructed
adjoining the seating
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area
towards its right.
In addition
, two dance
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studio
will be
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added
along the eastern wall. A leisure pool
is planed
to
be set
up in the west wing. One changing room will
be made
in the south-east corner and another in the south-west.
Finally
, a
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sports
shop and a
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caffe
will
be built
in the reception area.

Although most
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areas
of the center will be
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change
, the reception, the pool and the seating
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area
will remain the same.
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IELTS academic The plans below show the Layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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