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The chart below shows part of the results of an extensive public survey on people's attitude to a range of issues. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows part of the results of an extensive public survey on people's attitude to a range of issues. 155Ky
The pie chart illustrates a fraction of the wide range of public surveys on people's behavior towards a variety of issues such as whether money should be put into education and health or not. The responses are recorded in 3 categories yes, no, don't know. the scale is in percentage. Overall, the majority of people in the survey responded with yes money should be invested in the education sector and similar in health compared to studies whereas it was least for don't know regarding investment in education and similar for no and don't know for the problem that should money be given to health instead of studies. To begin with, the highest number of people agreed to invest money in education with 70 percent and in addition to that with just few amount of people with 20 percent responded with no that money should not be given into education sector and least among all replied with don't know about 10 percent. Moreover, the maximum number of people replied yes that money should be invested in health compared to the education sector. To add further balanced amount of people in a survey given their input as no and don't know with 30 and 30 percent respectively
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people
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money
should
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into
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education
and
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health
or not. The responses
are recorded
in 3 categories yes, no,
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don't
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know
.
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the
scale is in percentage.

Overall
, the majority of
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people
in the survey responded with yes
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money
should
be invested
in the
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education
sector and similar in
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health
compared to studies whereas it was least for
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don't
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know
regarding investment in
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education
and similar for
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no
and
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don't
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know
for the problem that should
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money
be
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given
to
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health
instead
of studies. To
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begin
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people
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agreed
to invest
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money
in
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education
with 70
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and
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just
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of
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people
with 20
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percent
responded with
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no
that
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money
should not be
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given
into
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education
sector and least among all replied with
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don't
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know
about 10
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percent
.
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, the maximum number of
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people
replied yes that
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money
should
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health
compared to the
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education
sector. To
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add
further
balanced amount of
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people
in a survey
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given
their input as
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and
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don't
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with 30 and 30
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respectively

IELTS academic The chart below shows part of the results of an extensive public survey on people's attitude to a range of issues.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
204 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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