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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where where relevant.

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. ny87

The maps detail the changes since 1920 to today of Grand Park. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the park added and expanded areas mainly related to entertainment including a larger stage and various areas for recreation. There was also significant relocation in terms of seating and the only areas that remained the same were the entrances and one minor garden. The most striking change is in the center of the park where the fountain has been removed in favour of a rose garden with full seating around it. To the left of the new garden, the previous stage for musicians has been turned into a much larger ampitheatre facing the opposite direction that will allow for concerts in the park. This change has necessitated the removal of both seating on the far left side as well as the rose garden in the bottom left corner of the map. The entrances at the top and bottom in the middle have remained unchanged but on the right side a cafe has replaced the rose garden and where there was a pond for water plants in the top right corner, there is now a children’s play area. Instead of the pond, a water feature has been built occupying the bottom right corner (replacing a glasshouse and some seats). Finally, leading to the water park is a new entrance for an underground car park.

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Park
. Looking from an overall
 perspective, it is readily
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park
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added
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areas
mainly
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areas
 for recreation. There was also
 significant relocation in terms of seating and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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areas
 that remained the same were the entrances and one minor garden.

The most striking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is in the center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 where the fountain has been removed
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favour
 of a rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 with full seating around it. To the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
, the previous stage for musicians has been turned
 into a much larger Possible spelling mistake found.amphitheater
ampitheatre
 facing the opposite direction that will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 for concerts in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 has necessitated the removal of both seating on the far This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side Probable usage error. Use "and" after 'both'.and
as well as
 the rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 in the bottom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner of the map.

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but
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cafe
 has replaced the rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 and where there was a pond for water plants in the top right corner, there is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 a children’s play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Instead
 of the pond, a water feature has been built
 occupying the bottom right corner (replacing a glasshouse and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 seats). Finally
, leading to the water You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 is a new entrance for an underground car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. 