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The plan of a university sports center before and after development

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The plans illustrate a sports center of a university at the present time and how it will look like after future development takes place. At present time, there are two outdoor courts which will be allocated for different purposes in the future development. The current area of the outdoor court on the West side will be used for the construction of a recreational pool connecting with a changing room on the South West corner. On the other hand, the outdoor courts area on the East side will be allocated for creating a sports hall and facilitating dance studios. Overall, the size of the gym will increase and have access way to the other areas of the sports center. In addition, there will a sports shop and a cafe on the left and ride side respectively on the way to reception. Also, there will be another changing room near the sports hall on the South East corner.
The plans illustrate a
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center of a university at the present time and how it will look like after future development takes place.

At present time, there are two outdoor courts which will
be allocated
for
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different
purposes in the future development. The
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current
area of the outdoor court on the West side will be
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used
for the construction of a recreational pool connecting with a changing room on the South West corner.
On the other hand
, the outdoor courts area on the East side will
be allocated
for creating a
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sports
hall and facilitating dance studios.
Overall
, the size of the gym will increase and have access way to the other areas of the
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sports
center.
In addition
, there will a
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sports
shop and a
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cafe
on the
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left
and ride side
respectively
on the way to reception.
Also
, there will be another changing room near the
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sports
hall on the South East corner.
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