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The pie charts illustrate the statistics of the UK residential owned and rented in the percentage of the homeowner, social renting, private renting and social housing in the year 1991 and 2007.

The pie charts illustrate the statistics of the UK residential owned and rented in the percentage of the homeowner, social renting, private renting and social housing in the year 1991 and 2007. 0pqlQ
The pie charts illustrate the statistics of the UK residential owned and rented in the percentage of the homeowner, social renting, private renting and social housing in the year 1991 and 2007. Overall, the majority group was the homeowner which was more than 50 per cent in both two years. However, there was a significant decrease in social housing from 6 per cent to 2 per cent in the year 1991 to 2007 respectively. Interestingly, the ratio of private renting was stabilised. Focusing on the 22 million homes in 1991, the data shows that over 11 million homes were owned by the homeowner. In addition, the percentage of renting houses was less than 30 per cent. Turning to the 27 million homes in 2007, the information reveals that approximately less than 14 million homes were not owned by the homeowner. Furthermore, the total number of renting houses was less than 35 per cent.
The pie charts illustrate the statistics of the UK residential
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owned
and rented in the percentage of the homeowner, social
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renting
, private
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renting
and social housing in the year 1991 and 2007.

Overall
, the majority group was the homeowner which was more than 50 per cent in both two years.
However
, there was a significant decrease in social housing from 6 per cent to 2 per cent in the year 1991 to 2007
respectively
.
Interestingly
, the ratio of private
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renting
was
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stabilised
.

Focusing on the 22
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million
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homes
in 1991, the data
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shows
that over 11
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million
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homes
were
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owned
by the homeowner.
In addition
, the percentage of
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renting
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houses
was less than 30 per cent.

Turning to the 27
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million
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homes
in 2007, the information reveals that approximately less than 14
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million
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homes
were not
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owned
by the homeowner.
Furthermore
, the total number of
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renting
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houses
was less than 35 per cent.

IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate the statistics of the UK residential owned and rented in the percentage of the homeowner, social renting, private renting and social housing in the year 1991 and 2007.

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