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Production of Sugar from Sugarcane

Production of Sugar from Sugarcane 66bm0

The diagram detailed above delineates how sugar is produced from sugarcane. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the process is comprised of 4 main stages including Growing and Harvesting, followed by Crushing and Purifying, then Evaporating and Centrifuging and finally Drying and Cooling. Sugar production commences when sugarcane is grown for 12-18 months and then harvested by two processes either by using sugarcane harvesting trucks or by hand. Then the harvested sugarcane is crushed to prepare juice using crushing machines. Collected sugar cane juice is purified through limestone filter. The next stages involve manufacture of sugar crystals from sugarcane juice. The purified juice is heated in an evaporator to form syrup. The syrup is placed in a centrifuge where it separates sugar crystals from syrup. Finally the sugar crystals are dried and cooled.

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sugar
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 from sugarcane. Looking from an overall
 perspective, it is readily
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is comprised of
 4 main stages including Growing and Harvesting, followed by Crushing and Purifying, then Evaporating and Centrifuging and finally
 Drying and Cooling. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
Sugar
 production commences when sugarcane is grown
 for 12-18 months and then harvested by two processes either by using sugarcane harvesting trucks or by hand. Then the harvested sugarcane is crushed
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juice
 using crushing machines. Collected You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 cane You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
is purified
 through limestone filter. The next
 stages involve manufacture of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 crystals from sugarcane You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
. The purified You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
is heated
 in an evaporator to form syrup. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 syrup is placed
 in a centrifuge where it separates You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 crystals from syrup. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
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sugar
 crystals are dried
 and cooled. 