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The pie charts give information about the ratio of water used for various objectives in six different areas across the world.

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The pie charts give information about the ratio of water used for various objectives in six different areas across the world. According to the chart, In most areas, South America, Africa, Central Asia and SouthEast Asia, They use water the most for agricultural purposes, just over 70%. In more detail, Central Asia uses water the most for agricultural use, making up to 88%, compared to 71% in South America, which uses water the most for domestic purposes, which accounts for 19%. The percentage of water used for industries in these areas is similar to each other, around 5 to 12%. On the other hand, in North America and Europe, roughly half of water is used for industrial purposes. Following Agricultural use, which accounts for around 35%, and domestic use, roughly 15%. It can be seen that Europe uses water the most for industrial objectives. For example, the percentage of water that is used for industries, which accounts for 53%, is ten -times higher than in Central Asia.
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the most for agricultural
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, making up to 88%, compared to 71% in South America, which
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the most for domestic purposes, which accounts for 19%. The percentage of
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for industries in these areas is similar to each other, around 5 to 12%.

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for industrial purposes. Following Agricultural
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, roughly 15%. It can be
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the most for industrial objectives.
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IELTS academic The pie charts give information about the ratio of water used for various objectives in six different areas across the world.

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