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The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The pie chart compares the proportion of houses owned and rented in Britain in 1991 and 2007 measured in percentage. overall, it can be seen that there was a significant increase in the percentage of home owner. To begin, in 1991 the percentage of home owner was just above half, but this gradually increased to about seven in ten(70%) in 2007, accounting for one of the major changes over the years. Also, social renting was the second in the trend which was about a quarter(25%) in 1991, but 2007 saw a decline in the proportion of social renting from 25% to about 12%. However, the percentage of private renting remained fairly constant for the next 16 years, about 12% over the years. No significant change was noticed. But social housing experienced a little change overtime. In 1991, the percentage of social housing was about 8%, making it the least for the year and in 2007, the proportion reduced to almost one in twenty(5%).
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houses
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owned
and rented in Britain in 1991 and 2007 measured in
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percentage
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overall
, it can be
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seen
that there was a significant increase in the
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percentage
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home owner
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begin
, in 1991 the
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home owner
was
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just
above half,
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this
gradually
increased to about seven in ten(70%) in 2007, accounting for one of the major
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changes
over the years.
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,
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renting was the second in the trend which was about a quarter(25%) in 1991,
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but
2007
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saw
a decline in the proportion of
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renting from 25% to about 12%.

However
, the
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percentage
of private renting remained
fairly
constant for the
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16 years, about 12% over the years. No significant
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change
was noticed
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But
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social
housing experienced a
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little
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change
overtime. In 1991, the
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percentage
of
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social
housing was about 8%, making it the least for the
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and in 2007, the proportion
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reduced
to almost one in twenty(5%).
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007.

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