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potato crisp production process

The diagram illustrates the process of potato crisp production in the factory. It takes a few steps to make a whole potato into a potato crisp. First, the potato will be cleaned with cold water. By this stage, potatoes are peeled with the slicer in the machine. After the potatoes are peeled and cleaned, they will be transferred to a slicer and sliced into smaller pieces and evenly. Next they will be air dried as they are transferred into the temperature cooker. Then the chips are cooked in the temperature cookers. After that process, the crisp are salted with the salter while they move to the bag packer process. The potato crisp will be packaged in a bag and all of them will have the same amount.
The diagram illustrates the process of
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potato
crisp production in the factory. It takes a few steps to
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make
a whole
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potato
into a
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potato
crisp.

First
, the
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potato
will
be cleaned
with
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cold
water. By this stage,
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potatoes
are peeled
with the slicer in the machine. After the
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potatoes
are peeled
and cleaned, they will
be transferred
to a slicer and sliced into smaller pieces and
evenly
.
Next
they will be air dried as they
are transferred
into the temperature cooker. Then the chips
are cooked
in the temperature cookers. After that process, the crisp
are salted
with the salter while they
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move
to the bag packer process. The
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potato
crisp will
be packaged
in a bag and all of them will have the same amount.

IELTS academic potato crisp production process

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  American English
2 paragraphs
127 words
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