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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries lNaW
The charts compare Korea, Sweden and the UK in terms of the methods used in each country to dispose of harmful waste. It is clear that in both the UK and Sweden, the majority of dangerous waste products are buried underground. By contrast, most hazardous materials in the Republic of Korea are recycled. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 82% of the UK’s dangerous waste is put into landfill sites. This disposal technique is used for 55% of the harmful waste in Sweden and only 22% of similar waste in Korea. The latter country recycles 69% of hazardous materials, which is far more than the other two nations. While 25% of Sweden's dangerous waste is recycled, the UK does not recycle at all. Instead, it dumps waste at sea or treats it chemically. These two methods are not employed in Korea or Sweden, which favour incineration for 9% and 20% of dangerous waste respectively.
The charts compare Korea, Sweden and the UK in terms of the methods
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used
in each country to

dispose of harmful waste.

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that in both the UK and Sweden, the majority of
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dangerous
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waste
products
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underground. By contrast, most hazardous materials in the Republic of Korea
are recycled
.

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that 82% of the UK’s
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dangerous
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waste
is put


into landfill sites. This disposal technique is
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used
for 55% of the harmful
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waste
in Sweden and
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only


22% of similar
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waste
in Korea. The latter country recycles 69% of hazardous materials, which is far

more than the other two nations.

While 25% of Sweden's
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dangerous
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waste
is recycled
, the UK does not recycle at all.
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, it dumps

waste at sea or treats it
chemically
. These two methods are not employed in Korea or Sweden, which

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incineration for 9% and 20% of
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waste
respectively
.
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