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The pie chart shows the user of Dating website in US

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the pie chart give information about the people use the various dating website in America and table illustrate why people not use website overall it can be see the nearly half of the people does not use a dating website but tender is most popular websit in America. firstly tunde is most popular dating websit in America around one fifth people use secondly matan is second highest popular websit all most 12% and rate of motesplatsen is around 8%and last happy pan cake is least used website in America and on the other hand all most half of people does not use deating websiteSecondly they are many people does not use dating website because they prefer to meet face to face and it's around 35% of people only one Thant of people say it can be chance of fack indentity and more than half people have not interested
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