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The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. QL8jL
The graph provides the information regarding the sales through online for retail sector namely groceries, home and kitchen, electronic appliances and clothing. Overall, clothes was the most bought item in 2005 however, electronic gadgets became the prefferd goods by 2010. As is signified in the illustration, 38% consumers did online shopping of dresses in 2005 and this rate declined by 16% in 2010. The same trend is true for home and kitchen appliances where more than a quarter consumers used to buy products online but slip backed to 11% in 2010. On the contrary, sale of food and beverages soared by 8%, from 14% to 22% in 5 years. Likewise, electronic appliances purchase surged by 26% from 19% to 45% making it the most sold products in 2010.
The graph provides the information regarding the sales through online for retail sector
namely
groceries, home and kitchen, electronic appliances and clothing.
Overall
, clothes was the most
bought
item in 2005
however
, electronic gadgets became the
prefferd
goods
by 2010. As
is signified
in the illustration, 38% consumers did online shopping of dresses in 2005 and this rate declined by 16% in 2010. The same trend is true for home and kitchen appliances where more than a quarter
consumers
used
to
buy
products online
but
slip backed to 11% in 2010.
On the contrary
, sale of food and beverages soared by 8%, from 14% to 22% in 5 years.
Likewise
, electronic appliances
purchase
surged by 26% from 19% to 45% making it the most sold products in 2010.
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010.

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