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The assigned pie chart expounds the information about consumption and production of coffee as well as where the profit goes in given nations. D ata is colibrated in percentage. Commencing at, 41%consumption was noticed in Europe which was the highest percentage. However, America was recorded 39%Utilization in coffee. On other hand, japan accounting a ant share in coffee consumption 8%respectively. In contrast, lion share of coffee manufacturing was recorded in South Africa about 44%. Interestingly 16% of production of coffee was done by Vietnam. Probing further, the highest profit share by delivery which was 51% considerably. Moreover, 24%and15% profit was made in coffee by retailers and producer. Exporters share profit in coffe was 10%only
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by delivery which was 51%
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IELTS academic The pie chart show consumptions and production of coffee and where profit goes

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