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THE PIE CHART BELWO SHOW THE DEVICES PEOPLE IN THE 18-25 AGE GROUP O WATCH TELEVISION IN CANADA IN TWO DIFFERENT YEARS.

THE PIE CHART BELWO SHOW THE DEVICES PEOPLE IN THE 18-25 AGE GROUP O WATCH TELEVISION IN CANADA IN TWO DIFFERENT YEARS. 3WxyY

THE PROVIDED PIE GRAPH COMPARES THE PROPORTION OF DEVICES USED BY YOUNG CANADIANS AGED BETWEEN 18-25 TO WATCH TELEVISION IN TWO YEARS, 2009, AND 2019. OVERALL, THE YOUNG PEOPLE CHOICE CHANGED DRASTICALLY OVER A DECADE AS IN FORMER YEAR THE HIGHEST AMOUNT OF TELEVISION WATCHED ON CONVENTIONAL-TV WHEREAS, FINAL PERIOD IT WAS MOBILE PHONE. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT THE PERCENTAGE FOR CONVENTIONAL TV EXPERIENCED A DRASTIC DECREASE FROM 34% TO 4% IN TEN YEARS. WHILE THE UTILIZATION OF FLAT-SCREEN INCREASED DRAMATICALLY FROM 8% IN 2009 TO 27% IN 2019. THE CONSUMPTION OF DESKTOP COMPUTERS IN 2009 WAS 18% AND IT DECREASED SIGNIFICANTLY TO 12% OVER 10 YEARS. PROBING FURTHER, MOBILE PHONE USAGE IN THE FIRST PERIOD WAS ACCOUNTED FOR 15% AND IT SKYROCKETED TO 26% IN A GIVEN PERIOD. WHILST, THE CONSUMPTION OF TELEVISION ON LAPTOPS WAS 20% WHICH, FELL DRASTICALLY TO 12% WHEREAS, THE PERCENT FOR TABLET ROSE BY 15% FROM 2009 TO 2019.

THE PROVIDED PIE GRAPH COMPARES THE PROPORTION OF DEVICES This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
USED
 BY YOUNG CANADIANS AGED BETWEEN 18-25 TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
WATCH
 TELEVISION IN TWO YEARS, 2009, AND 2019.

OVERALL
, THE YOUNG This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 CHOICE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
CHANGED
DRASTICALLY
 OVER A DECADE AS IN FORMER YEAR THE HIGHEST AMOUNT OF TELEVISION This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
WATCHED
 ON CONVENTIONAL-TV WHEREAS, FINAL PERIOD IT WAS MOBILE PHONE.

IT CAN BE CLEARLY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
SEEN
 THAT THE PERCENTAGE FOR CONVENTIONAL TV EXPERIENCED A DRASTIC DECREASE FROM 34% TO 4% IN TEN YEARS. WHILE THE UTILIZATION OF FLAT-SCREEN INCREASED DRAMATICALLY
 FROM 8% IN 2009 TO 27% IN 2019. THE CONSUMPTION OF DESKTOP COMPUTERS IN 2009 WAS 18% AND IT DECREASED SIGNIFICANTLY
 TO 12% OVER 10 YEARS.

PROBING FURTHER
, MOBILE PHONE USAGE IN THE FIRST
 PERIOD WAS ACCOUNTED
 FOR 15% AND IT SKYROCKETED TO 26% IN A This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
GIVEN
 PERIOD. WHILST, THE CONSUMPTION OF TELEVISION ON LAPTOPS WAS 20% WHICH, FELL DRASTICALLY
 TO 12% WHEREAS, THE PERCENT FOR TABLET ROSE BY 15% FROM 2009 TO 2019. 