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The pie chart below shows the percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India from 2012 to 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie chart below shows the percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India from 2012 to 2017. 2WLj

This pie chart illustrates the proportion of ad expenditures by six different kinds of media over a period of 2012-2017 in India. Overall, TV and Print being the most favorable ad spending by Media where half of the money spent on these two. And, Cinema being the least favorable expenditure. Similarly, There is a large difference in digital over the period of 5 years. Firstly, The amount of money spent by media on Tv in 2012 is 43% and it rose to about 45% in 2017. Similarly, The approximate expenditure for Print in 2012 is 38% and it had a decline of 30% in 2017. Meanwhile, the amount spent on Digital had a increase in proportion from 6% to 15% from 2012-2017 respectively. Secondly, there is no much expenditure made on Outdoor media type which remained 5% over the period of 5 years. Whereas, Radio saw a decline in numbers from 7% to 4% respectively. There has been no money spent on ad in cinema.

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