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The chart below shows the value of one countr’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.the table shows the percentage change in each category exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one countr’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in each category exports in 2016 compared with 2015. 0POl
The value of a country's exports may vary in various categories in different years. usually, the percentage of changes in exports earning will differ by year and category. here is some information about a country's export earnings based on the year 2015 and 2016. first, I will start with the country's most money-making export which is petroleum products. by the year 2016, the country gained 3% more in the category than the year 2015. however, for gems and jewellery, the percentage of the export earning decreased by 5. 18% by the year 2016. Next, engineered goods earnings also follow the foot steps of petroleum product earnings by gaining more than 8% in 2016 than in 2015. the value increases from more than 50 billion to more than 60billions in just a year. this statistic also concludes that the engineers in the country have gained more by the year 2016. besides that, agricultural products and textiles also earned more with 0. 81% and 15. 24%. repectively even though, agricultural products do not gain more than 1%. it stills conclude that the products are still wanted by many people as it earned about more than 30 billions for both years. while for textures, it is seen that it gains it popularity in the year of 2016. this is proved, when the statistic states that the earning was increased by more than 15. 24% in the year 2016 based on the year 2015. textiles products earned more than 25 billion in 2015 and earned more than 30 billion in the next year. in conclusion, we can see that this country has overall succeeded in the year 2016 than the year 2015. the country managed to gain more than 22% in the year 2016. even though gems and jewelry had a decrease of earnings by 5. 18%, it is still the third money-making export product from the country.
The value of a country's
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may vary in various categories in
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usually
, the percentage of
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changes
in
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exports
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earning
will differ by
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year
and category.
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here
is
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some
information about a country's
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export
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earnings
based on the
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year
2015 and 2016.

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first
, I will
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start
with the country's most money-making
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export
which is petroleum
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products
.
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by
the
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year
2016, the
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country
gained 3% more in the category than the
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year
2015.
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however
, for gems and
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jewellery
, the percentage of the
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export
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earning
decreased by 5. 18% by the
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year
2016.

Next
, engineered
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goods
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earnings
also
follow the foot steps of petroleum
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product
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earnings
by gaining more than 8% in 2016 than in 2015.
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the
value increases from more than 50
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billion
to more than
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60billions
in
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just
a
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year
.
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this
statistic
also
concludes that the engineers in the
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country
have gained more by the
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year
2016.

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besides
that, agricultural
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products
and textiles
also
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earned
more with 0. 81% and 15. 24%.
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repectively
even though
, agricultural
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products
do not gain more than 1%.
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it
stills conclude that the
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products
are
still
wanted by
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many
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people
as it
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earned
about more than 30
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billions
for both years.

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while
for textures, it is
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seen
that it gains it popularity in the
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year
of 2016.
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this
is proved
, when the statistic states that the
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earning
was increased
by more than 15. 24% in the
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year
2016 based on the
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year
2015.
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textiles
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products
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earned
more than 25
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billion
in 2015 and
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earned
more than 30
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billion
in the
next
year.

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in
conclusion, we can
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see
that this
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country
has
overall
succeeded in the
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year
2016 than the
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year
2015.
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the
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country
managed to gain more than 22% in the
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year
2016.
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even
though gems and jewelry had a decrease of
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earnings
by 5. 18%, it is
still
the third money-making
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export
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product
from the
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country
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one countr’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in each category exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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