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The pictures reveal changes that have taken place in Station street from 1960 to now.

The pictures reveal changes that have taken place in Station street from 1960 to now. paq79

The pictures reveal changes that have taken place in Station street from 1960 to now. Overall, it is clear that the street station has changed considerably from which butcher, toy, book store, bakery, and DVD rental store have been replaced by a large supermarket in the middle of the station street. As shown from the map in 1960, back then, the station street running from east to west was lined with a railway station. There was a pharmacy to the west of this road and next to a butcher, and opposite a grocery and public telephone in the south of these areas. Besides, there were 4 regions were built and in the middle of these areas, including a toy, a book store, a bakery, and a DVD rental store. In addition, the railway station in the south of them. A fish and chips shop was located to the east of the street station, and there was a dry cleaner’s was in the southwest of the station street. Until now, the most notable change that took place in the station street was the construction of a supermarket in these areas. In the center of the map, the street station remained unchanged. However, there was parking erected to the west of these areas, and all of the previous sectors were replaced by a large supermarket in the middle of these areas, a café was established. In addition, the grocery was demolished and replaced by a hotel. Moreover, the railway station was expanded to meet the increasing demand. However, the eastern of the dry cleaner’s remained undeveloped.

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