Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Violence on TV and Computer Games

Violence on TV and Computer Games n1QpE

For some people, violence (aggressiveness, aggression, hostility) on TV and in computer games may be harmful for community. While they think like this, others claim the opposite idea and think that these factors don’t have any considerable effect on people’s behaviour. I believe that, watching television and playing computer games are not harmful activities by default, but using them unconsciously can be dangerous. Kitaptaki: These days, the amount of violence in media is growing. While some people argue that this trend will undoubtedly lead humans to dangerous future, others claim that it has no damaging effect on the society. I believe that in most cases media violence doesn’t affect people’s behaviour. Firstly, spending too much time in front of TV and computer games can be harmful to our health; physically, psychologically and mentally. Passing too much time in front of a monitor, makes our brain cells inactive, so then it may cause mental torpor on brain, even decrease IQ level. It also brings some cardiovascular diseases due to physical inertia (stability, inactivity). In addition, almost every age group is psychologically affected by harmful violent scenes in television and computer games. So many times we hear some terrible news saying that; “In the USA, a young attacker was influenced by a harmful computer game and killed many innocent people in a market”. Another sorrowful example is that once a child affecting by a cartoon film, jumped out his home's balcony then passed away. Some advertisements which included aggressive visual materials also encourages taking some dangerous materials or products that have negative impacts on viewers. On the contrary, some people believe that watching harmful television programs or playing violent computer games doesn’t have any significant influence on a person’s behaviour. According to them, harmful effects depend on personal habits. If people use TV or computer games in an appropriate way, it may be beneficial for them for some aspects, such as People act from their motives, regardless what they see on the television. We see a lot of benevolence some informative documentaries, knowledgeable programs, even, in the pandemic period remote education possibilities on TV.

For This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, violence (aggressiveness, aggression, hostility) on TV and in computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 may be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinimicalunhealthynoxiouscatastrophicunsafepernicious
harmful
 for community. While they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 like this, others claim the opposite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that these factors don’t have any considerable effect on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people’s
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
. I believe that, watching You use this word too often, consider replacing it withTV setboxstationvideoaudio
television
 and playing computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 are not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinimicalunhealthynoxiouscatastrophicunsafepernicious
harmful
 activities by default, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 using them unconsciously
 can be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Kitaptaki
:

These days, the amount of violence in media is growing. While This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 argue that this trend will undoubtedly
 lead humans to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 future, others claim that it has no damaging effect on the society. I believe that in most cases
 media violence doesn’t affect You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people’s
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
.

Firstly
, spending too much time in front of TV and computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 can be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinimicalunhealthynoxiouscatastrophicunsafepernicious
harmful
 to our health; physically
, psychologically
 and mentally. Passing too much time in front of a monitor, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 our brain cells inactive, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 then it may cause mental torpor on brain, even decrease IQ level. It also
 brings This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 cardiovascular diseases due to physical inertia (stability, inactivity).

In addition
, almost every age group is psychologically
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinimicalunhealthynoxiouscatastrophicunsafepernicious
harmful
 violent scenes in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withTV setboxstationvideoaudio
television
 and computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 times we hear This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 terrible news saying that; “In the USA, a young attacker was influenced
 by a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinimicalunhealthynoxiouscatastrophicunsafepernicious
harmful
 computer game and killed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 innocent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in a market”. Another sorrowful example is that once a child affecting by a cartoon film, jumped out his home's balcony then passed away.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 advertisements which included aggressive visual materials also
 encourages taking This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 materials or products that have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impacts on viewers.

On the contrary
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 believe that watching You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinimicalunhealthynoxiouscatastrophicunsafepernicious
harmful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withTV setboxstationvideoaudio
television
 programs or playing violent computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 doesn’t have any significant influence on a person’s Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
. According to them, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinimicalunhealthynoxiouscatastrophicunsafepernicious
harmful
 effects depend on personal habits. If You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 TV or computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with the adverb for "appropriate"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an appropriate way
, it may be beneficial for them for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 aspects, such as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 act from their motives, regardless what they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withTV setboxstationvideoaudio
television
. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 benevolence This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 informative documentaries, knowledgeable programs, even, in the pandemic period remote education possibilities on TV. 