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The line graph give information about economic growth. The pie chart shows the ability to use the facilities and needs and purchasing power of people. Strengthener, the figures suggest a link between about economic growth and household expenditure access a range of categories. From 2005 to 2020. If we divide the line chart into tree parts, we can see fall locality. Economic growth in those 5 years. The line chart didn't significantly decrease and remained relatively flat thereafter. The pie chart shows that in those 5 years we have seen to increase household expenditure and the purchasing power of the people in the field of food. Which results in access to food security. The chart has been steadily continue with unnoticeable changes until 2015. In 2015 our peak point is in the field of economic growth which has been largest growth rate in the last 15 years. Hence in addition to access to food security caused increase expenditure on entertainment such as travel and shopping due to had been increased salaries and income. Soon after, we have been facing a significant decline which is result af that lowest economic growth rate. Thus, less access to entertainment and shopping, rising hosing and food prices will reduce life expectant and people will become more depressed day by day
The line graph give information about
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economic
growth.

The pie
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chart
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shows
the ability to
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use
the facilities and needs and purchasing power of
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people
.

Strengthener, the figures suggest a link between about
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economic
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growth
and household expenditure
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access
a range of categories. From 2005 to 2020.

If we divide the line
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chart
into tree parts, we can
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see
fall locality.

Economic
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growth
in those 5 years. The line
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chart
didn't
significantly
decrease and remained
relatively
flat thereafter.

The pie
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chart
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shows
that in those 5 years we have
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seen
to increase household expenditure and the purchasing power of the
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people
in the field of
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food
.
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Which
results in
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access
to
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food
security. The
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chart
has been
steadily
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continue
with unnoticeable
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changes
until 2015.

In 2015 our peak point is in the field of
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economic
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growth
which has been
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largest
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growth
rate in the last 15 years.

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Hence
in addition
to
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access
to
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food
security caused increase expenditure on entertainment such as travel and shopping due to had
been increased
salaries and income.

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Soon
after, we have been facing a significant decline which is result
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af that
lowest
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economic
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growth
rate.

Thus
, less
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access
to entertainment and shopping, rising hosing and
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food
prices will
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reduce
life expectant and
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people
will become more depressed day by day
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IELTS academic economic growth facilities and needs and purchasing power

Academic
  American English
10 paragraphs
215 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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