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The picture is about how solar works and transfer power.

The picture is about how solar works and transfer power. PrrbJ
The diagram demonstrates how Solar energy Converts in to electrical Power. To begin with, solar panels is the main Source of Solar electricity. The sunlight reflect on the photovoltaic plates (panels) and it is Converts heat in to Current. After that, this current Pass through 12 V battery. Here, battery has Split the Current in to two divison. First went in to run fan and Cooler, also that um use Charge for Cell Phone as well as spotlight. The Other current has sent to inverter where 12 volt current transferred into 230 volt current. In the end this would be used in pumping water, flourscent lighting and to start laptop or television. Overall, solar electricity is a very cheap as well as easily produceble energy. There were no pollution or no environmental hazard.
The diagram demonstrates how
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Solar
energy Converts in to electrical Power.

To
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begin
with,
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solar
panels is the main Source of
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Solar
electricity. The sunlight
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reflect
on the photovoltaic plates (panels) and it is Converts heat in to
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Current
. After that, this
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current
Pass through 12 V battery. Here, battery has Split the
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Current
in to two
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divison
.
First
went in to run fan and Cooler,
also
that um
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use
Charge for Cell Phone
as well
as spotlight.

The Other
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current
has
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sent
to inverter where 12 volt
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current
transferred into 230
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volt
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current
. In the
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this would be
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used
in pumping water,
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flourscent
lighting and to
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start
laptop or television.

Overall
,
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solar
electricity is a
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very
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cheap
as well
as
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energy. There were no pollution or no environmental hazard.
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IELTS academic The picture is about how solar works and transfer power.

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133 words
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