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The number of tourists visiting Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003 is presented below

This graph represents the number of tourists who visited Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003. overall, more tourists visited Malaysia from 1995 to 2000 but afterward, Dubai acquired more visitors (from 2001 to 2003). Going into details, 100 thousand tourists visited Malaysia in 1995 and it was more than double the number of tourists in Dubai at the same time. next year, the number of visitors in Dubai remains while it increased in Malaysia. Afterward, The number of visitors to Dubai and Malaysia increased rapidly. In 1998, 200 thousand tourists visited Malaysia in comparison to over 150 thousand in Dubai. From 1998 to 1999, the number of tourists in Malaysia had a huge increase and reached quarter-million tourists while in Dubai there was a slight decrease. Interestingly, the number of tourists in both countries has reached over a quarter million. Next year, both countries witnessed a hike in their visitor’s number which stood at about 325 thousand. A reverse trend during the next few years followed with more visitors in Dubai than in Malaysia. From 2001 to 2002, the number of tourists passed through a very small reduction probably inconsiderable. In 2003, 0. 4 million tourists visited Dubai, a dramatic rise compared to that of 1995.

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