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The chart provides statistics related to internet usage among various age groups of the female population in the US in the year 2000 and 2001. The bar chart indicates the usage in 2000 whereas the line graph depicts that in the year 2001

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The chart provides statistics related to internet usage among various age groups of the female population in the US in the years 2000 and 2001. The bar chart indicates the usage in 2000 whereas the line graph depicts that in the year 2001 On a quick glance, the percentage of women using the internet gradually increased in 2001. All of the people in the age group 16-18 used the internet in 2001. The age groups 12-15 and 19-24 didn’t have many changes in the duration whereas the age groups 16-18 and 36-45 have increased by more than 10%. The highest percentage of internet users were in the age group 12-15 whereas the 16-18 group was the most active internet users. In both years, the lowest percentage of internet users are from the 65+ age group. However, in the same age group, the usage rose from 20% to 30% In 2000, as the age increased, internet usage gradually decreased with the usage being plunged to only 20% for the 65+ age group. Summarizing this information, we saw that female internet users have been more active in 2001 than in 2000.

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