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Nowadays, more individuals are choosing healthier lifestyles given the fact of not consuming animal products, such as, meat or fish.

Nowadays, more individuals are choosing healthier lifestyles given the fact of not consuming animal products, such as, meat or fish. 7a0aA
Nowadays, more individuals are choosing healthier lifestyles given the fact of not consuming animal products, such as, meat or fish. Firstly, it is important to understand and correlate the importante and the underestimated value which animal carries at present. To put it simply, is necessary to see how the population growth gives pain and suffer to what we call domestically animals, whilst, we are feeding ourselves on a nice dinner table. Despite of feeding population, taking in consideration any health scheme and big corporations and farmers, we need to be aware of the pain inflicted with their massive production. Opposers might have a glance of veracity while refuting with the argument that animals do not have feeling or consciousness. In contrast, how can we be 100% sure of consciousness and feeling if we do not know if all of us has the same possibility to have it or even to be able to define it. Secondly, small groups of society are stating a point while asking how our ancestors, 2 centuries ago or more, were capable to survive with a different diet whereas major part of our big civilization can not have a meal without fish or meat. In other words, how we turned to a path where is a strict rule to eat fish or meath throughout the entire week, month, year and decades leading to a tremendous increase of pollution due this massive production. Hence, researches have been conducting studies to provide an answer and the results can be fascinating. Consequently, more scientists and individuals who are in a diet without any animal product, are experiencing less dramatic mood changes and feeling more energy. Making them a living poof of a healthy and uncommon path. In my honest opinion, I adopted a vegetarian diet recently and I am feeling the effects mentioned above. I really think, that nationals and individuals must need to make an effort to reduce industrial production and consumption of animals. Therefore, the world would be greener and happier.
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to understand and correlate the
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and the underestimated value which
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animal
carries at present. To put it
simply
, is necessary to
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see
how the population growth gives pain and suffer to what we call
domestically
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animals
, whilst, we are feeding ourselves on a nice dinner table.

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Despite of
feeding population, taking in consideration any health scheme and
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big
corporations and farmers, we need to be aware of the pain inflicted with their massive production.

Opposers might have a glance of veracity while refuting with the argument that
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animals
do not have
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feeling
or consciousness.
In contrast
, how can we be 100% sure of consciousness and
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feeling
if we do not know if all of us has the same possibility to have it or even to be able to define it.

Secondly
,
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small
groups of society are stating a point while asking how our ancestors, 2 centuries ago or more, were capable to survive with a
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different
diet whereas major part of our
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big
civilization can not have a meal without fish or meat.
In other words
, how we turned to a path where is a strict
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rule
to eat fish or
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meath
throughout the entire week, month, year and decades leading to a tremendous increase of pollution due this massive production.
Hence
, researches have been conducting studies to provide an answer and the results can be fascinating.
Consequently
, more scientists and individuals who are in a diet without any
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animal
product, are experiencing less dramatic mood
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changes
and
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feeling
more energy. Making them a living poof of a healthy and uncommon path.

In my honest opinion, I adopted a vegetarian diet
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recently and
I am
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feeling
the effects mentioned above. I
really
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think
, that nationals and individuals
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must
need to
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make
an effort to
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reduce
industrial production and consumption of
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animals
.
Therefore
, the world would be greener and happier.
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IELTS academic Nowadays, more individuals are choosing healthier lifestyles given the fact of not consuming animal products, such as, meat or fish.

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