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The maps illustrate how the university sports centre is going to be reconstructed in the future from its current setup.

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The maps illustrate how the university sports centre is going to be reconstructed in the future from its current setup. Looking from the overall perspective, it is clear that outdoor courts and main building are going to be combined under a big construction. Many other brand-new facilities will be developed at the expense of some outdoor space. First, outdoor courts to the west will be changed to leisure pool while the opposite court will lose some of its size and be converted to a sports hall. Current gym will be extended its size to the east and two dance studios, changing rooms, sports shop and café will be constructed around the former university sports centre. However, current main building’s facilities will be fairly unchanged except gym space. In conclusion, in the future the sport centre will look bigger than the present and all facilities will be located under the big building.
The maps illustrate how the university
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sports
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centre
is going to
be reconstructed
in the future from its
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current
setup.

Looking from the
overall
perspective, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that outdoor courts and main building are going to
be combined
under a
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big
construction.
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Many
other brand-new facilities will
be developed
at the expense of
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some
outdoor space.

First
, outdoor courts to the west will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
to leisure pool while the opposite court will lose
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some
of its size and
be converted
to a
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sports
hall.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Current
gym will
be extended
its size to the east and two dance studios, changing rooms,
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sports
shop and café will
be constructed
around the former university
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sports
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centre
.
However
,
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current
main building’s facilities will be
fairly
unchanged except gym space.

In conclusion
, in the future the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sport
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
will look bigger than the present and all facilities will
be located
under the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
building.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate how the university sports centre is going to be reconstructed in the future from its current setup.

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