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The first stage of the brick manufacturing process is when a digger takes a clay from the ground.

The first stage of the brick manufacturing process is when a digger takes a clay from the ground. 6a370
The first stage of the brick manufacturing process is when a digger takes a clay from the ground. After that, the clay is filtered by a metal grid on a roller where it is transferred to the next level of the process. The next stage in the cycle is to add sand and water on the filtered clay so that it is ready to be shaped as the brick. There are two method options for shaping, first one is to use a wire cutter while another one shapes the brick by mould. After the completion of shaping stage, the next step is usually bricks are transferred to drying oven where those are stayed around 24-48 hours. Once it finished, moderating cycle is able to start which is the final stage of the manufacturing. Dried bricks are moderated by high temperature using a kilns, where those are heated by 200 C – 980 C then, up to 870 C -1300 C. Following this, the bricks go to a cooling chamber and stay there 48-72 hours. Finally, the bricks are now ready to be packaged and then delivered to a construction site.
The
first
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stage
of the
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brick
manufacturing process is when a digger takes a clay from the ground. After that, the clay
is filtered
by a metal grid on a roller where it
is transferred
to the
next
level of the process. The
next
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stage
in the cycle is to
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add
sand and water on the filtered clay
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so
that it is ready to
be shaped
as the
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brick
. There are two method options for shaping,
first
one is to
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use
a wire cutter while another one shapes the
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brick
by
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mould
.

After the completion of shaping
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stage
, the
next
step is
usually
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bricks
are transferred
to drying oven where those
are stayed
around 24-48 hours. Once it finished, moderating cycle is able to
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start
which is the final
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stage
of the manufacturing. Dried
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bricks
are moderated
by high temperature using
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a kilns
, where those
are heated
by 200 C
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–
980 C then, up to 870 C -1300 C. Following this, the
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bricks
go to a cooling chamber and stay there 48-72 hours.

Finally
, the
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bricks
are
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now
ready to
be packaged
and then delivered to a construction site.
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IELTS academic The first stage of the brick manufacturing process is when a digger takes a clay from the ground.

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6.0
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