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The given chart compares the quantity of books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School in 4-year-period from 2009.

The given chart compares the quantity of books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School in 4-year-period from 2009. 2RJJw
The given chart compares the quantity of books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School in 4-year-period from 2009. In general, the number of books to the extent of girls show the tendency to gradually increase during four years, meanwhile boys are less preferable in 2011-2012 period. As far as the chart is concerned, beginning with roughly twenty five books, the figure then increased to fourty one year later and witnessed a jump with more than two times in the next one year. Comparably, boys showed less significance with a gradual rise from about fifty books to one hundred books. From that intersection in 2011, the difference became clearer and clearer with books read by girls continued to accelerate to the number of one hundred and forty, while those of boys fell to merely eighty. Overall, girls seems to be more interested in books than boys over the years.
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Starmouth
School in 4-year-period from 2009.

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, the number of
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books
to the extent of
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girls
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are less preferable in 2011-2012 period.

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, beginning with roughly
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twenty five
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books
, the figure then increased to
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fourty
one
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year
later and witnessed a jump with more than two times in the
next
one
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.
Comparably
,
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boys
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showed
less significance with a gradual rise from about fifty
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books
to one hundred
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books
. From that intersection in 2011, the difference became clearer and clearer with
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books
read by
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girls
continued to accelerate to the number of one hundred and forty, while those of
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boys
fell to
merely
eighty.

Overall
,
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girls
seems to be more interested in
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books
than
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boys
over the years.
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IELTS academic The given chart compares the quantity of books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School in 4-year-period from 2009.

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