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The maps depict the development, in terms of geographical distribution, which occurred in the mother tongue languages of the people of Cape Town over a ten-year period.

The maps depict the development, in terms of geographical distribution, which occurred in the mother tongue languages of the people of Cape Town over a ten-year period. OJ7k
The maps depict the development, in terms of geographical distribution, which occurred in the mother tongue languages of the people of Cape Town over a ten-year period. Overall, it can be seen that from 2001 to 2011, Afrikaans spread north and east to become the dominant language in the region, and English and Xhosa as home languages diminished. In 2001, English was the predominant language spoken at home by most people in the Cape Peninsula region; however, by 2011 it had become less common, with Afrikaans becoming people’s first language in the southern part of the peninsula. Similarly, the number of people speaking Xhosa in the False Bay region reduced slightly and the area became more diverse in this regard. Looking further to the east and south, neither the Cape Winelands nor the Gordon’s Bay areas had dominant languages in 2001, although ten years later Afrikaans had become much more popular as the first language in both these regions and it also remained more popular than other languages in the Northern Suburbs of Cape Town over the decade.
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language
in the
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, and English and Xhosa as home
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diminished.

In 2001, English was the predominant
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spoken at home by most
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;
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Afrikaans becoming
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in the southern part of the peninsula.

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speaking Xhosa in the False Bay
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region
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east and south, neither the Cape
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Winelands
nor the Gordon’s Bay areas had

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in 2001, although ten years later Afrikaans had become much more popular as the
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regions
and it
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remained more popular than other
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in the Northern Suburbs of Cape Town over the decade.
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IELTS academic The maps depict the development, in terms of geographical distribution, which occurred in the mother tongue languages of the people of Cape Town over a ten-year period.

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