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The maps below shows recent changes in the town of Kimsville.

The maps below shows recent changes in the town of Kimsville. laVK
The given maps demonstrated town of Kimsville in 2002 and how it was changed until now. Overall, one of the key difference between two times period is replacing the greenness and factory to buildings such as apartments, football stadium and software company. Conserning to the Kimsville town in 2002, there was especially popular greenness, as we can see from certain groups of trees which were located on the corner of the town. On the eastern part of the city centre was factory, which will be knocked down in further couple of decades. In addition, on the north and south of the city centre were two facilities, which are shopping centre and old cinema. Turning to the Kimsville town in this day, there stand out certain differences, such as constructing new train station, which is in the eastern part of the town, besides it, turning into greenness to new apartments and football stadium was also noticable part of the changes. Furthermore there is actively demonstrated the demolishing of factory and replacing it to software company.
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IELTS academic The maps below shows recent changes in the town of Kimsville.

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