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The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.

The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. mkE8
The pie chart illustrates the career choices of Brighton University's 2019 graduates, giving the percentages who worked in each of various sectors after finishing university. Overwhelmingly, industry and government were the most popular choices. Just under half the students went into industry, with service industries attracting more Brighton graduates than any other sector by far — almost a third (33. 0%). About half that number (16. 3%) took jobs in manufacturing. Politics and public service were the next most popular choice, accounting for nearly a fifth of graduates. Just over 12% went into politics and a further 5. 6% chose the civil service. The other significant career choices were education (about 15%) and two others: transportation and warehousing, with 7. 8%; and science and technology with 7. 3%. The least popular choices included work in the charitable sector and careers in sport, both of which were chosen by well under 1% of graduates. Finally, 2. 8% entered work in other, unspecified, sectors.
The pie chart illustrates the career
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of Brighton University's 2019
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, giving the percentages who worked in each of various
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after finishing university.
Overwhelmingly
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were the most popular choices.

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under half the students went into industry, with service industries attracting more Brighton
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than any
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by far — almost a third (33. 0%). About half that number (16. 3%) took jobs in manufacturing.

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over 12% went into politics and a
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significant career
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were education (about 15%) and two others: transportation and warehousing, with 7. 8%; and science and technology with 7. 3%.

The least popular
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included work in the charitable
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and careers in sport, both of which
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.

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