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The maps show the town and changings of this town

The maps show the town and changings of this town 0q9l

The given diagrams provide information on grange park in 1920 and how has it changed until now. In general, the key changes are amphitheatre has changed instead of musician's stages and fountain is now rose garden, also pond was replaced by children's play area. Regarding to the grange park in 1920, we can see that entrance Arnold Avenue and Eldon street are located in same place as now. So, the first impression of the visitors in 1920 directed to fountain placed in the centre of the park. Entering via the Eldon street in the west of the park was stage for musicians with seats and rose garden along the wall. To the north-east of the park was pond water for plants on the corner, and beside the entrance there was glasshouse. Back to the present day diagram, the fountain which dominated in the centre of the park in 1920 has been changed to the rose garden surrounded by seats. Second major difference was replacing of musician's stages to the amphitheatre for concerts. In addition, pond for plants is now children's play area with the café next to it. Furthermore, glasshouse has been changed, and entrance underground park constructed with it.

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