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The maps below shows changes in Frenton in 1990 and 2012.

The maps below shows changes in Frenton in 1990 and 2012. dpjxP
The given maps illustrate changes in Frenton between 1990 and 2012. Overall, we can observe many changes took place in Frenton during 2 decades, the most marked information in the map is that only school, library and high street wasn't modernized. At the first glance, the playing fields with trees in the north of town, were replaced with flats. The Houses in the east of Frenton were also converted into blocks of flat and made larger. Furthermore, the cafe and park east of High street turned into Hotel and Golf course, while the theatre and shop were transformed a cinema and supermarket. The bank west of High street, replaced to restaurant and made expand. And the location of hospital wasn't changed, however it was also developed. Sadly, the trees in the southwest of the town were cut down to open up for a technopark.
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Frenton
during 2 decades, the most marked information in the map is that
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school, library and high street wasn't modernized. At the
first
glance, the playing fields with trees in the north of town,
were replaced
with flats. The
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Houses
in the east of
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Frenton
were
also
converted into blocks of flat and made larger.
Furthermore
, the
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cafe
and park east of High street turned into Hotel and Golf course, while the
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theatre
and shop
were transformed
a cinema and supermarket. The bank west of High street, replaced to restaurant and made expand. And the location of hospital wasn't
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changed
,
however
it was
also
developed.
Sadly
, the trees in the southwest of the town were
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cut
down to open up for a
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technopark
.

IELTS academic The maps below shows changes in Frenton in 1990 and 2012.

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