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The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. qJYp
The illustrated chart below summarize the information on how often individual in the USA ate at a fast food restaurants in 2000-2013. Overall, People pay visit regularly the fast food restaurants to have their meals once a week or twice a month. Likewise, only 4% persons from 2003 ate fast food almost every day and fallen by 1% population from 2006 and 2013. In 2003 and 2006, there is a noticeable movement of population who are having their meal in a restaurants, approximately 16% and 20% respectively, several times a week increased by 31% and 34% once a week. There is a visible increase trend that people in 2013 consumed their meals in a restaurants 3% almost everyday to several times a week (16%) and it increases by 28% then 33% who only eaten once a week of even once or twice a month outside of their home. Futhermore, people never visit a restaurants to have their meals remained constant throughout the year although it has the same percentage with people who went at a fast food restaurants everyday. As a whole, People in the united states of America visit regularly the fast food restaurants and have their meals remains a trend from 2003, 2006 and 2013.
The illustrated chart below summarize the information on how
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in 2000-2013.

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almost every day and fallen by 1% population
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from 2006 and 2013
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meal
in a
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restaurants
, approximately 16% and 20%
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increased by 31% and 34%
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a
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. There is a visible increase trend that
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people
in 2013 consumed their
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meals
in a
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3% almost
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(16%) and it increases by 28% then 33% who
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never visit a
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remained constant throughout the year although it has the same percentage with
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As a whole,
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united states of America
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and have their
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remains a trend from 2003, 2006 and 2013.
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