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the map shows a floor of a house and plan of redevelopment.

the map shows a floor of a house and plan of redevelopment. Ol38E
The given map of the floor chart of a house illustrates a house and future plans for redevelopment. Overall the kitchen / social area extends, New institute bathroom is added however, the garden remove and installed as parking. Entrance is made small in future plans. Other areas stayed the same. Firstly, there are two study/bedrooms added in a redevelopment plan where is the first new study/bedroom will be next to the west study/bedroom, consequently, the entrance will have a small space. Following Garden on the north has a living room which will be removed and made as large long study/bedroom, so next north side study/bedroom given small space in redevelopment. Nevertheless, the bathroom near to hall remains the same, but the hall will add a new institute bathroom on the south corner the kitchen/social area space will be extended which is on the east side of the map. there is a study/bedroom, next to the new institute bathroom on the South East which is at the same location. The garden used to be on South will replace as a parking area on redevelopment plan of a house.
The
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map of the floor chart of a
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house
illustrates a
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house
and future
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plans
for redevelopment.

Overall
the kitchen / social
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area
extends,
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New
institute
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bathroom
is
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added
however
, the garden remove and installed as parking. Entrance
is made
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small
in future
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plans
. Other
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areas
stayed the same.

Firstly
, there are two
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study/bedrooms
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added
in a redevelopment
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plan
where is the
first
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new
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study/bedroom
will be
next
to the west
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study/bedroom
,
consequently
, the entrance will have a
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small
space. Following Garden on the north has a living room which will
be removed
and made as large long
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study/bedroom
,
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so
next
north side
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study/bedroom
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given
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small
space in redevelopment.

Nevertheless
, the
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bathroom
near to hall remains the same,
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but
the hall will
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add
a
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new
institute
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bathroom
on the south corner the kitchen/social
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area
space will
be extended
which is on the east side of the map.
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there
is a
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study/bedroom
,
next
to the
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new
institute
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bathroom
on the South East which is at the same location. The garden
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used
to be on South will replace as a parking
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area
on redevelopment
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plan
of a
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house
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IELTS academic the map shows a floor of a house and plan of redevelopment.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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