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the map shows a floor of a house and plan of redevelopment.

the map shows a floor of a house and plan of redevelopment. Ol38E

The given map of the floor chart of a house illustrates a house and future plans for redevelopment. Overall the kitchen / social area extends, New institute bathroom is added however, the garden remove and installed as parking. Entrance is made small in future plans. Other areas stayed the same. Firstly, there are two study/bedrooms added in a redevelopment plan where is the first new study/bedroom will be next to the west study/bedroom, consequently, the entrance will have a small space. Following Garden on the north has a living room which will be removed and made as large long study/bedroom, so next north side study/bedroom given small space in redevelopment. Nevertheless, the bathroom near to hall remains the same, but the hall will add a new institute bathroom on the south corner the kitchen/social area space will be extended which is on the east side of the map. there is a study/bedroom, next to the new institute bathroom on the South East which is at the same location. The garden used to be on South will replace as a parking area on redevelopment plan of a house.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 map of the floor chart of a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 illustrates a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and future You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plans
 for redevelopment.

Overall
 the kitchen / social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 extends, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
New
 institute You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoiletbathshowerlavatorysaunarestroom
bathroom
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
however
, the garden remove and installed as parking. Entrance is made
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 in future You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plans
. Other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 stayed the same.

Firstly
, there are two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study/bedrooms
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in a redevelopment You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
 where is the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study/bedroom
 will be next
 to the west You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study/bedroom
, consequently
, the entrance will have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 space. Following Garden on the north has a living room which will be removed
 and made as large long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study/bedroom
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
next
 north side You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study/bedroom
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 space in redevelopment.

Nevertheless
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoiletbathshowerlavatorysaunarestroom
bathroom
 near to hall remains the same, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the hall will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 institute You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoiletbathshowerlavatorysaunarestroom
bathroom
 on the south corner the kitchen/social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 space will be extended
 which is on the east side of the map. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 is a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study/bedroom
, next
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 institute You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoiletbathshowerlavatorysaunarestroom
bathroom
 on the South East which is at the same location. The garden This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be on South will replace as a parking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 on redevelopment You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
 of a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. 