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The line charts below show the levels of economic growth and air pollution

The line charts below show the levels of economic growth and air pollution XD6B8
The line graphs illustrate the level of economy growth as well as air pollution of Norway and China from 1990 to 2016. Overall, in Norway economic growth increased steadily throughout time period. Whereas, air pollution in this nation fell down dramatically throughtout given time. In addition, in China GDP per capita and air pollution rocketed throught the given time period. In Norway, it is observed that, the economic growth grew steadily from about 6000 US dollar to 9000 US dollar between 1990 and 2016. Whereas air pollution experienced steady decreased from about 9000 to 7000 US dollar between 1990 to 2006. After 2006 to 2010, is was fluctuated and after 2014 it fell down from 7000 to 6000 us dollar. With regards to China, the air pollution rocketed from about 1000 to 6000 US dollars between 1990 to 2005. Then it fuuctuated between 7000 to 8000 US dollars throughtout time period. During 1990 to 2016, China experienced a steady increase from about 1000 to 7000 US dollar.
The line graphs illustrate the level of economy growth
as well
as
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air
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pollution
of Norway and China from 1990 to 2016.

Overall
, in Norway economic growth increased
steadily
throughout
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time
period.
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Whereas
,
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air
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pollution
in this nation fell down
dramatically
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throughtout
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given
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time
.
In addition
, in China GDP per capita and
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air
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pollution
rocketed
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throught
the
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period.

In Norway, it
is observed
that, the economic growth grew
steadily
from about 6000 US
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dollar
to 9000 US
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dollar
between 1990 and 2016.
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Whereas
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air
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pollution
experienced steady decreased from about 9000 to 7000 US
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dollar
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between 1990 to 2006
. After 2006 to 2010, is
was fluctuated
and after 2014 it fell down from 7000 to 6000 us
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dollar
.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
With regards to
China, the
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air
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pollution
rocketed from about 1000 to 6000 US
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dollars
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between 1990 to 2005
. Then it
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fuuctuated
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between 7000 to 8000
US
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dollars
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throughtout
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time
period. During 1990 to 2016, China experienced a steady increase from about 1000 to 7000 US
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dollar
.
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IELTS academic The line charts below show the levels of economic growth and air pollution

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