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The maps depict the renovation which has occurred in the art gallery since 2005. Overall, it is clear that some major changes have been made in the West of the gallery while the buildings in the East of the gallery still remain. It is also noteworthy that the gallery’s size is smaller than it was in 2005. In the southwest corner of the gallery, the cafe and shop and gallery office have been transformed into a gallery shop and three new buildings have been built on the outside of the gallery shop. Below them, there has been demolished Exhibition room 4 to erect two areas which are temporary exhibitions in the middle and the recreational parks for children in the South-West of the gallery. On the opposite, the remaining unchanged has been illustrated in the area where the arts display with exhibition room 3 which is located in the North-East corner, followed by exhibition room 2 in the middle and exhibition room 1 in the South-east corner. Furthermore, in the North of the gallery, the stairs from the upper to the floor were partly removed to make room for lift as well as the steps in the South have been divided into two parts adding the ramps for wheelchairs for disabled people or injured people. Additionally, in the center of the gallery, there has been a shift toward the shape of the reception desk from rectangular to the quadrangle.
The maps depict the renovation which has occurred in the art
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gallery
since 2005.

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, it is
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clear
that
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some
major
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changes
have
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in the West of the
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gallery
while the buildings in the East of the
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gallery
still
remain. It is
also
noteworthy that the
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gallery’s
size is smaller than it was in 2005.

In the southwest corner of the
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gallery
, the
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cafe
and shop and
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gallery
office have
been transformed
into a
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gallery
shop and three new buildings have
been built
on the outside of the
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gallery
shop. Below them, there has
been demolished
Exhibition
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room
4 to erect two areas which are temporary exhibitions in the middle and the recreational parks for children in the South-West of the gallery.

On the opposite, the remaining unchanged has
been illustrated
in the area where the arts display with exhibition
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room
3 which
is located
in the North-East corner, followed by exhibition
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room
2 in the middle and exhibition
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room
1 in the South-east corner.

Furthermore
, in the North of the
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gallery
, the stairs from the upper to the floor were partly removed to
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make
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room
for lift
as well
as the steps in the South have
been divided
into two parts adding the ramps for wheelchairs for disabled
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people
or injured
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people
.
Additionally
, in the center of the
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gallery
, there has been a shift toward the shape of the reception desk from rectangular to the quadrangle.
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6.0
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