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The map illustrates three dissimilar residential areas in the city of New Townsville.

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The map illustrates three dissimilar residential areas in the city of New Townsville. Overall, it can be seen that all the residential areas have transport facilities and they converch with each other at one point in the traffic-free zone. West residential district C has the biggest population number among other A and B areas, with more than 160 thousand people. Another essential information is that the residential district C has been connected to the airport by subway. Also, the area has highway roads that are associated with industrial zone in the South-West and go through the park in the North-West. Next South-West residential area B has 80 thousand living citizens. The district has been linked to the industrial area in the North-East by the subway. Last East residential district A has 90 thousand people staying in it. This area has a highway road that has been joined to the South-West industrial district. The road passes by a large traffic-free zone in the centre and skirts a park in the North-East.
The map illustrates three dissimilar
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in the city of New Townsville.

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, it can be
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seen
that all the
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residential
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areas
have transport
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facilities and
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converch
with each other at one point in the traffic-free zone.

West
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residential
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district
C has the biggest population number among other A and B
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areas
, with more than 160 thousand
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people
. Another essential information is that the
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residential
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district
C has
been connected
to the airport by subway.
Also
, the
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area
has highway roads that
are associated
with industrial zone in the South-West and go through the park in the North-West.

Next
South-West
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residential
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area
B has 80 thousand living citizens. The
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district
has
been linked
to the industrial
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area
in the North-East by the subway.

Last East
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residential
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district
A has 90 thousand
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people
staying in it. This
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has a highway road that has been
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joined
to the South-West industrial
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district
. The road passes by a large traffic-free zone in the
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centre
and skirts a park in the North-East.
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