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The map illustrates how a village named Ryemouth developed over the period of twenty six years

The map illustrates how a village named Ryemouth developed over the period of twenty six years PgBR2
The map illustrates how a village named Ryemouth developed over the period of twenty six years In an overview, the map shows significant changes that took place from the year 1995 to map till date (present days). In 1995 there was afishing port to the South of the map which is abolished. The fish market on the main road side near the see and the shops across the read are replaced by apartments and restaurant. Moving ahead to the right side at the corner parking space is allotted for the hotel guests. Moving further towards the north there was a forest park and farmland to the east, which is now known as sports area. The housing society to the West of the map has increased and new roads have been constructed connecting the the main road. Hence, this map describes the gradual growth in the village, modernising the life style of the village.
The
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map
illustrates how a village named
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Ryemouth
developed over the period of
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twenty six
years

In an overview, the
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map
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shows
significant
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changes
that took place from the year 1995 to
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map
till date (present days).

In 1995 there was
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afishing
port to the South of the
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map
which
is abolished
. The fish market on the main road side near the
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see
and the shops across the read
are replaced
by apartments and restaurant.

Moving ahead to the right side at the corner parking space
is allotted
for the hotel guests. Moving
further
towards the north there was a forest park and farmland to the east, which is
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now
known as sports area. The housing society to the West of the
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map
has increased and new roads have
been constructed
connecting
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the the
main road.
Hence
, this
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map
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describes
the gradual growth in the village,
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modernising
the life style of the village.
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IELTS academic The map illustrates how a village named Ryemouth developed over the period of twenty six years

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