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The map below shows the changes that have been taken place in a seaside area since 1995. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the changes that have been taken place in a seaside area since 1995. qV55G
The differences between two maps have illustrated the changes where have situated in a seashore across from 1995 onward. Since 1995 over the period of 15 years, the trees have been cut down and the forest park to the north of hotel have converted to tennis playground. And also, the farmland that above it made into golf pitch. Additionally, the shop area redeveloped to the restaurant which was to the north of horizontal road. Simultaneously, the fish market which was nearby cafe modernized to apartments and then it also enlarged. However, the new houses have been constructed in the surrounding area road considerably. At the same time, the cafe to the north east of the seaside was in the same place. On the contrary, the car park next to the hotel have been erected, which was in the corner of horizontal and vertical roads. Overall, the number of trees have been reduced in the centre of town. Thus, the new bigger houses expanded and the farmland has knocked down which has occupied for golf square.
The differences between two maps have illustrated the
changes
where have situated in a seashore across from 1995 onward.

Since 1995 over the period of 15 years, the trees have been
cut
down and the forest park to the north of hotel have converted to tennis playground. And
also
, the farmland that above it made into golf pitch.
Additionally
, the shop area redeveloped to the restaurant which was to the north of horizontal road.
Simultaneously
, the fish market which was nearby
cafe
modernized to apartments and then it
also
enlarged.

However
, the new
houses
have
been constructed
in the surrounding area road
considerably
. At the same time, the
cafe
to the
north east
of the seaside was in the same place.
On the contrary
, the car park
next
to the hotel have
been erected
, which was in the corner of horizontal and vertical roads.

Overall
, the number of trees have been
reduced
in the
centre
of town.
Thus
, the new bigger
houses
expanded and the farmland has knocked down which has occupied for golf square.
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IELTS academic The map below shows the changes that have been taken place in a seaside area since 1995.

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4 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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